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Glenn Winters's avatar

Poetry blunt but vivid. Really well done. "Rainfall that never fell"... a good line.

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Celeste's avatar

Thank you kindly Glenn!

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Mandy Franklin's avatar

The poem is lovely, but the educational addition at the end was so unexpected and awesome.

Very cool!

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Ulysses Santillan's avatar

Thanks for the info.

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Ron's avatar

neat

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wild honeysuckle's avatar

"Two hours with a pickaxe to plant something

that needed different ground entirely." I can t put my finger on why, but i love this sm

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Celeste's avatar

Every time you enjoy something I wrote it means a lot to me!!! <3 tysm

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Nick August's avatar

So elegant and nuanced. Love it.

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